Hey, I just wanted to say that everything here so far seems really well made. I love the trippy colorful art style. It fits very well with the tone of the story and background music. The pacing feels fast and engaging compared to a lot of other vns. The overall tone does a good job portraying how lost and uncertain Ben is about his future living out a car. But I feel like this hopelessness is somewhat balenced out by the lighter conversations with the people at the party, after stepping out of his comfort zone a bit.
I'm looking forward to seeing more about Ben and his troubled past. I like the mystery you've setup with it, and it seems like there's a lot that could be unpacked there.
PS: I saw the message at the end, I really hope you can find the support and success you need to be able to improve your situation.
I'm gonna assume the plot takes place in the reservation areas of Arizona, because as a Native American who lived on an Arizona reservation, I can somewhat say this is SLIGHTLY accurate.
Band? You mean tribe or something else? BTW if ya want, we can take the convo over to Discord if you want more insight about reservations and the struggles, maybe that'll give you some ideas mayhaps?
This was really cool. I started trying to use Ren'Py but kind of gave up when my coder friend burned out, and I was anxious to figure it out on my own. I love the artwork and would like to see more. I hope you're able to continue the story and earn financial income from this project.
Thanks! If you keep it relatively simple, Ren'Py is pretty easy. As soon as you want to customize things too much it can really fight you haha so I get it.
Huh. I thought the Hell No option would circle back to the party, but instead of going their because you want it party, it would be because you want to SURVIVE.
But yeah, I get why the fake out was there. Mc WANTS to get out of their shell. Using the excuse of SURVIVAL would be... a different feeling.
LOVE the writing, but there are some grammar, spelling, and formatting errors(which I guess is grammar too?).
Least favorite character right now: Sherry (laughed at the common misunderstanding of Social Anxiety and shyness. It's a classic :) )
This is REALLY good. Keep it up. Any other ways we can support your work? Can't do patreon right now.
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Hey, I just wanted to say that everything here so far seems really well made. I love the trippy colorful art style. It fits very well with the tone of the story and background music. The pacing feels fast and engaging compared to a lot of other vns. The overall tone does a good job portraying how lost and uncertain Ben is about his future living out a car. But I feel like this hopelessness is somewhat balenced out by the lighter conversations with the people at the party, after stepping out of his comfort zone a bit.
I'm looking forward to seeing more about Ben and his troubled past. I like the mystery you've setup with it, and it seems like there's a lot that could be unpacked there.
PS: I saw the message at the end, I really hope you can find the support and success you need to be able to improve your situation.
I'm gonna assume the plot takes place in the reservation areas of Arizona, because as a Native American who lived on an Arizona reservation, I can somewhat say this is SLIGHTLY accurate.
So far? No. But at some point? Totally.
In all honesty, I'd be interested in seeing that! It could help with plot or world building if you do the research and put the pieces together.
Out of curiosity, which band are you from?
Band? You mean tribe or something else? BTW if ya want, we can take the convo over to Discord if you want more insight about reservations and the struggles, maybe that'll give you some ideas mayhaps?
Sure, I’m Reedflower on discord too.
This was really cool. I started trying to use Ren'Py but kind of gave up when my coder friend burned out, and I was anxious to figure it out on my own. I love the artwork and would like to see more. I hope you're able to continue the story and earn financial income from this project.
Thanks! If you keep it relatively simple, Ren'Py is pretty easy. As soon as you want to customize things too much it can really fight you haha so I get it.
came here from youtube. glad to be here.
Huh. I thought the Hell No option would circle back to the party, but instead of going their because you want it party, it would be because you want to SURVIVE.
But yeah, I get why the fake out was there. Mc WANTS to get out of their shell. Using the excuse of SURVIVAL would be... a different feeling.
LOVE the writing, but there are some grammar, spelling, and formatting errors(which I guess is grammar too?).
Least favorite character right now: Sherry (laughed at the common misunderstanding of Social Anxiety and shyness. It's a classic :) )
This is REALLY good. Keep it up. Any other ways we can support your work? Can't do patreon right now.
Hey, thank you so much for your comment! If you don't mind, would you be able to point out the errors? I'd love to fix them.
Playing the game, commenting, telling your friends, all these things help!
Sure! I'll love to play again. I'll share this game as best as I can.